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To see what your friends thought of this book, please sign up. Kennie rated it it was ok Apr 11, Or more importantly will poor Ely break his 3 month sexual dry spell? Once again I'm unsurprised Mark has managed to get so much time with his characters naked; I will be anxiously awaiting these four's next adventure in space. This didn't stop me from enjoying the story, it was just a little bothersome. For each red mark, you can deduct a percentage from your editor's fees for your next book
There was a problem filtering reviews right now. Please try again later. Wonderfully imaginative world building, an exciting adventure and a sweet, sexy love story. Young Ely gets put to the test over and over again and comes out a winner. Amazon Giveaway allows you to run promotional giveaways in order to create buzz, reward your audience, and attract new followers and customers.
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Feedback If you need help or have a question for Customer Service, contact us. Would you like to report poor quality or formatting in this book? Click here Would you like to report this content as inappropriate? Click here Do you believe that this item violates a copyright? It was totally unbelievable. Ok, we're relying on 4 guys who just graduated college to save the ship? Just those 4 guys? Oh, and the commander who doesn't seem to do much? Good to know we're in good hands. We board an alien ship that's obviously up to no good and hostile and let's wander around casually.
Two of us get captured? And we were doing so well up until now. Ely main character finds Emerson his bf that got captured and has to decide whether to help Emerson or rescue all the ships that are now trapped by the aliens.
So, on one side we have his bf, on the other eight or so thousand military personnel in multiple battleships and the fate of the human race. Ely's gonna go rescue his bf.
Are these guys soldiers or 14 year old girls??? The romance between Ely and Emerson was fine, no problems there. That story was ok. But pretty much at every turn where the secondary military plot wove into the story, it was pure fail. And that ruined the whole thing for me. It was hard to treat the characters seriously when they were being such complete idiots as soldiers. Aug 21, Pam rated it really liked it Shelves: Despite being a typical journey into space story, battling an unknown alien race, it's also filled with bantering conversation, a growing relationship between Ely and Emerson that includes plenty of sizzling hot sex and some good friendships.
The twists and turns regarding the aliens, the starships and how they got free from the aliens were all handled well and were done believably. There are things I had problems with.
Some of the phrases were repeated, others were too sweet or cheesy and others Despite being a typical journey into space story, battling an unknown alien race, it's also filled with bantering conversation, a growing relationship between Ely and Emerson that includes plenty of sizzling hot sex and some good friendships. Some of the phrases were repeated, others were too sweet or cheesy and others were just downright inappropriate for what was going on in the scene. This didn't stop me from enjoying the story, it was just a little bothersome.
The next story is First Contact. Aug 20, M'rella rated it really liked it Shelves: I hate to say that, but I am taking half a star off for editing. Some phrases kept popping up over and over and over again, pulling me out of the story. Taking another half star away for too much sweetness.
But it's my personal taste, has nothing to do with the book. That said - 4 solid stars. I will definitely buy the sequel. Very nice and easy read. Loved all the characters, great set up for the story.
There are not a lot of good sci-fi out there, unfortunately. View all 3 comments.
Nov 24, MiaJ rated it liked it Shelves: Sometimes three stars seem like a put down. I did like it, I just did not really like it. Aug 20, Enny rated it liked it. The sci-fi parts of the story were great but I failed to see why the MCs were attracted towards each other - the great sex aside ;. Mar 01, Kadesha rated it liked it Shelves: Aug 22, Carole-Ann rated it liked it Shelves: Great fun in a geeky sorta way.
Clever bit of sci-fi engineering going on here too!! Aug 20, Cherie Noel marked it as to-read.
I can't wait to read this one! It's at the very tippy-top of Mt. Adrianamae, Marco's fan rated it liked it Dec 15, Lucia rated it it was amazing Aug 20, Leslie rated it it was ok Feb 05, Mark rated it liked it Jul 02, Stephanie rated it liked it May 23, Gwendolyn rated it liked it Mar 21, Christina Enness rated it it was amazing Jan 21, Biljana rated it it was ok Oct 01, R rated it it was amazing Jan 10, Behold advice - Tough choices for me. Who would you pick? I'm suddenly very glad I never did the Cadet Challenges.
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